Heroine Fan-Art Creator Contest RESULTS

Dear contestors, I deeply apologize for the enourmous delay with judging. Due to the many many entry's, I needed a lot of time to read all of them (exept for the ones schoggette did, thank you for that!). But, it's still not a good reason to be this late. I hope you all can forgive me! So now here are the results, and a short judge-impression of all entry's. Thank for the great story's you guys

1: Red Riding Hood - A great twist on the original fairytale with an amazing character design. (by menolikee)
- 50 points, llama and watch from me.
- Your own folder in the group's favourites!

2: Alais Venenwood - A story with great options, because it's endless! The designs were the best I've ever seen. (by kawaiibrit)
- 30 points, llama and watch from me.
- Your own folder in the group's favourites!

3: A prince for a Princess - A cute and perfect disney story, with perfect princess dresses! (by keb17)
- 15 points, llama and watch from me.
- Your own folder in the group's favourites!

Other ones that were very close to the winners: the Miller's daughter, Katreya, Toshihime, Lucy Wilkerson, the mysterious Celo, Gudrun and actually all of them it was very very hard to judge this! Thanks for all your effort.

---------------------------------------------

Judging: Toshihime
Story: What an impressing story! The storyline was marvelous and very science-fiction like, and I really liked the idea of a young woman making decisions for herself and standing up for her love and country too. This would make a great book I think. However, for a Disney-story it might be a bit to violent and complicated. Also, it is a bit like Mulan. But, again, I think the story itself was great! You should keep writing.
Doll: The dolls created with your story were stunning. Not only they looked very pretty, the details were awesome! I’ve never before see someone making such great use of the drag and drop items. I’m still not sure how you managed to make the armor in the second panel, but it looks insane good. Also I really liked how you played with the background options, by making the lion in the background and changing the roses into chrysants (they were chrysants right?) Very cool. They also fit perfectly with your story. So well, for that part you would (if we were giving grades, wich we aren’t) definitely get a A+

Judging: The Fire Inside
Story: I really like the moral of this story a lot. Anne seems like a lovely girl to me, turning into a real woman later on in the story. I think you can get a lot out of this story, and add many details in this about her journey to the raiders land, and how she got into the dungeons and all. So that would make a great Disney movie. I missed a bit the love-interrest, but that’s okay. Not every story needs to be a love story (though maybe Disney ones do need it a bit) I also liked the idea of Spark a lot, great extra.
Doll: I like how you designed Anne as the shy unnoticed girl. Great use of colors too. I think you could have done more with the second panel, since Anne became a warrior and exept for her facical expression you don’t see that really back in her clothes. Something more different from the first panel and more warrior like would maybe have been better. But overall, I liked the design a lot.

Judging:  December Luella Tristana Cole
Story: cool story, I like the fact that she goes to such a bordinglike school as hoghwarts, but this story isn’t really qualified to be a Disney story, since it’s maybe to violent.
Doll: I really like the design of December, she looks cute but also sassy

Judging: the Story of Calliope
Story: I think this story is very interesting! I really like that she isn’t the typ of girl that says yes at the moment the king loves her like in the normal fairytales. But in the end they come togheter anyway and that’s cool and perfect for Disney movies
Doll: Very pretty and original dresses! I love the second dress a lot, same for the fourth. Calliope herself looks very pretty too.

Judging: a prince for a princess
Story: A very cool, fairytale like story. This would be perfect for a Disney movie I think, great job!
Doll: Evelyn is soooo pretty, expecially the ballgown is gorgeous and I love the idea of having a mask on. You sure get extra points for that!

Judging: Katreya
Story: I really like how you used the fairytale of the white cat for this. Princesses turning into animals is new and would be great and original in a new Disney movie. Good job!
Doll: Katreya is a pretty girl, I don’t completely understand why Myrnya is letting her wear the blue dress though. I like the pearly things on the nightgown a lot.

Judging: Moss Gown
Story: I liked the story but I missed the originality a bit since you mostley took it from the original story. It’s cool to have a story without a prince, that is actually original.
Doll: I just love the Moss gown, very great job on that. The other outfits are great too, I like the first one.

Judging: The Millers Daughter
Story: When I saw that you based it on Rumpelstiltskin I was a bit afraid it wouldn’t be that original. But I was happily surprised when I read your story, very original and what a nice twist to the original one! Great Disney stuff
Doll: Stephane looks simple yet stylish. I like her miller’s outfit wich is perfect fitting to the story. The sapphire dress is cool as well, but I would have liked some sparkles to show it’s sapphireness

Judging: Lucy Wilkerson
Story: A great and original story that I enjoyed to read. Not much to say, great job! I’m sure in the end Aaron and Lucy will come togheter! Well okay.. I hope they will ^^
Doll: Very beautiful and great job. I love her attire as thief but my fav is the ballgown wich is very original and the colorscheme is perfect. Great job.

Judging: Allerleirauh
Story: Allereirauh is a cool story but your version is very very similar to the original fairytale and that’s a pitty.
Doll: I like how you did the 3 dresses, expecially the moon-one looks gorgeous

Judging: Rough Face Girl
Story: I really enjoyed this story, great job. I’m not sure what was meant with the rainbow and the milky way clothes, but that’s okay Also they way she is tortured by her sisters isn’t really good for a Disney story, but it was cool to read.
Doll: I expecially like the second doll where she is proud on her ‘silly’ outfit. Great job on the character design.

Judging: Aricia’s Rainy Dance
Story: What a cute story, I enjoyed to read it. It would be to short and plot-less for a Disney story, but I don’t care cause for a short fairytale it was perfect ^^ well done!
Doll: Aricia really is pretty. I would have liked it if it was a normal deviation instead of the image above a story, so I could have seen it better. Her princess dress is very original. Cool.

Judging: Red Riding Hood
Story: An amzing storytwist! It was awesome to read and I love how the original fairy tale comes back in this story.
Doll: I guess the first 4 dolls are Red at different ages? If so, really cool, I love how she grows older and her outfit becomes more like her personality. Great detail on the little blue flowers that return in every outfit. She looks perfect.

Judging: Unicorn Maiden
Story: Good story, I have actually nothing more to say.
Doll: I really like the outfits, expecially the second one wich is original. Great use of drag and drop items

Judging: The Highwayman: Bess
Story: Cute story about two lovers who ran away from the world to be togheter
Doll: I really like Bess’ design, she looks very pretty

Judging: Gudrun
Story: 1000 words, perfectly done I like the story of a young girl who is smart enough to become a hero(ine). Great job!
Doll: I think this doll is one of my favourites. Expecially the weddingdress is very original and perfectly fitting to the place where this story takes place. Great job.

Judging: Marylinn Bron
Story: Cool story where friendship grows to love, not much to say
Doll: I like how sweet Marylinn looks with the freckles and the cute pink dress.

Judging: Aida
Story: Instead of telling the story you tell how to change the plot, wich is perfectly fine. I agree that it would make a good Disney story after these few changes, well done.
Doll: I really like your version of Aida, she look beautiful yet simple. I think Amneris should look even more extravagant, but I understand you tried to keep it like the clothes they wear around Egypt.

Judging: Nut, the goddess of the sky
Story: It’s very original to use a myth instead of a fairtytale. But I’m unsure that it would make a good Disney story.
Doll: I really like Nut’s looks, very goddess like, well done. I agree with the skin color

Judging: Mermaid in the Deep
Story: It was very hard to read the story cause the sentences were not all placed well and sometimes there was another language(?) in it too. Also no right use of .?! etc. I think the story is cool though, but too complicated and scary for a Disney story.
Doll: I really like the design of Amy, the pink hair and black tail look perfect togheter.

Judging: 12 dancing princesses
Story: The story is quite similar with the original story, but I liked it. Very Disney-ish.
Doll: I really like the dresses you made, the purple one looks indeed more strict and the pink/yellow one seems a great dancing dress. The different colored ribbons on the nightgowns is a great idea.

Judging: Angel’s Prophecy
Story: Cute story but could have been more explained. How do they fall in love, do they have to fight for eachother (otherwise a movie would be a bit boring) etc.
Doll: The angel looks really cute, I would have liked to see her as a human too.

Judging: Mermaid Princess
Story: I like the idea of a normal teenage girl becoming a magic creature, though it’s a lot like Barbie in a Mermaid Tale (if you don’t know this then sorry, you couldn’t knew it already existed).
Doll: I like the fact that it’s a modern girl and her outfit looks really cool. As a mermaid she looks pretty awesome.

Judging: Alais Valenwood
Story: I love the fact that the story is open-ended. It's creative and an original idea.
Doll: The outfits follow the styles of the various time periods in the story, which I really appreciate. The artist makes everything look cohesive though.

Judging: Angara's Story
Story: Overall I liked the story there were a few points though I was a little confused.  there is not really a lot of bad to say about the story I thought it was well balanced and a wonderful Disney inspired tale.
Doll: I loved the look of the doll she wasn't over decorated, and that’s what I liked about it.  The simplicity of all of her outfits was beautiful.  I also thought that all the outfits fit well in the story.


Judging: Little Small
Story: I really loved the story and would love to see it animated.  The story, I feel gives off sort of a Cinderella vibe.  Loved the story, I feel theirs nothing to say bad about this story.
Doll: I like all of the outfits you put Little Small in, I really love the 3rd outfit, the idea with using those little lines as stitches, simply brilliant!! I thought the doll fit well in the story.


Judging: Gwen
Story: Though it was very short, it was simple and too the point, I liked how it turned out in the end.  Very untraditional and refreshing. Not much bad I can say.
Doll: I loved all the outfits you choose to create I really enjoy the last one. I also loved the expressions you gave her, I thought it was very appropriate for her to look a little wary when she was in the wedding dress.  Overall I thought it fit well in the story.

Judging: Zoie
Story: Very short and lacking in detail, you could've at least added some details. Nice description of how the man got Zoie's attention, you could have given him a name though.
Doll: Very nice simple, goes with the story very plain. Yet tasteful.


Judging: Dolly and the Beast
Story: You could have retold the Beauty and the Beast story with your own twist would have been nice.  Not much to say.
Doll: The maid outfit and the ball gown remind me too much of Belle. Though it is different, its just not too different.


Judging: The Mysterious Celo
Story: I loved it I thought the whole back-story of how Celo's parents met was very interesting and the fact that I totally get the whole forbidden to be together thing.  I thought it was very Disney of her to escape and attend the ball.  Overall wonderful job!
Doll: I personally loved how you created the wings and her fairy outfit.  Also I thought the dress was very simple yet elegant.  The small bracelet on her leg I thought was genius!  She fit into the story very well.


Judging: Thieving Purple Eyed Girl
Story: Great plot line I wish you wouldn’t have left it on a cliff hanger though.  Very original and creative. Well done.
Doll: Both of them are wonderfully done, I really like the second one though. They both fit well in the story, and I can actually get the feel for what Auralee would actually be like.  

Judging: The Ice Queen
Story: The back story for her was very well done, I loved that you made her a very undeterred person.  The story was short sweet and to the point very nicely done.
Doll: I loved how you outlined her with the glowing things, very creative and well done, I thing the doll goes very well in the story.

Contest Entry: The Maid from Ravenswood Manor
Story: I like the Plot Idea with taking reference on “Phantom of the Opera”. It is a bit bad that she had to make it short but understand if she wants to publish it that she can’t give away too much. A bit more information about the character would have been nice.
Outfit: Outfits match the Story and the Era in the Story; I love the Red Dress and her idea to make a Mask and Roses on the Dress

Caroline, the Goose-Girl
Story: Not sure about this case but the Story is completely based on the Goose Girl from the Brothers Grimm. The name of the Horse is the same and the part with the Handkerchief and the three bloods drops as well. She just gave the Characters names and in her Story the Horse is just locked away instead of getting killed.
Outfit: The outfits are pretty and fitting to caroline, I like the orange princess dress and the maid outfit next to it.


Tribal sen sen
Story: A bit short, more details about Characters and Events would be nice
Outfit: Well it looks like a mix between Pocohantas and Kida so I miss the Originality


Contest: Anuti the Genie
Story: a cute and short story. I thought that it would be a bit like a Female Aladdin but I’m happy to see that it isn’t this way. She could have a written a bit more over the Journey and how the characters fell in love with each other but that is just what I miss.
Outfit: Very nice and colourful. I loved how she used the Drag and Drop Items to make the outfits unique and special in their own way. The colour of Skin and Hair matches just perfect.


The Hindu Princess Bride by ~ChibiMandi
Story: Good story, also a lot of details. Nothing else to say
Outfit: She used Drag and Drop Items to make the outfits special and I have the feeling that she was working really long on them but it paid off. I also like it that she made an outfit from the Step Mother too. The Clothes look exactly how I imagine them being worn in Hindu Culture during that time.


S'Pirate Avita
Story: She wrote just a short part of her story but posted some Extra Information so it easy to get a good idea what will happen in the story
Outfit: Good Outfits too bad she didn’t mention at which occasions her Character is wearing them


Contest entry - Pirate Princess
Story: A bit confusing in the middle with getting captured and the search for the Golden Nut but I like her idea and the plot she made up
Outfit: Well done, I like that she made one Princess Look and one Pirate Look